Many students struggle with writing, and they wonder why they
have to go through this. Clearly, we live in a society that value writing, and we
write in one form or another almost every day. Writing has become a basic
requirement in today’s technology-driven life and in the information age where most of the information is written. Writing is probably more
important now than at any time in our history. All educators consider writing as
the most appropriate way to assess students’ learning and predict their
academic success. Therefore, students need to learn
writing effectively in school to be prepared to participate
in today’s civic life
One of the quotes that Kelly Gallagher has included in her text”
Write Like this- Teaching Real World Writing Through Modeling and Mentor Texts”
is:
Every year in
the United States large numbers of adolescents graduate from high school unable
to write at least at the basic levels required by colleges or employees. In
addition, every school day 7,000 young people drop out of high school, many of
them because they lack the basic literacy skills to meet the growing demands of
the high school curriculum (Graham and Perin 2007, 3)
The fact that a large number of secondary students are
unable to write effectively to meet the demands of colleges and careers has
blown my mind. It makes me think of the reasons behind this, and what can I do
about it as a future science teacher? As Gallagher suggested, students need to
know why they should write and the purpose of writing in real life. When
students know why writing is important in real life, they are more likely to
put more effort to learn it effictively.
Gallagher outlined a number of purposes for
writing in the real life. The purposes are: express and reflect, inform an
explain, evaluate and judge, inquire and explore, analyze and interrupt, and
take a stand/propose a solution. I think teaching students these purposes would
be very beneficial in science classes. As a future science teacher, I am
thinking about how I could implement these purposes in my lessons. I have tried
to do the real-world writing purposes chart that Gallagher provided in his text
by myself on a scientific topic such as global warming as shown in the table below.
I think this chart is really an effective exercise to teach writing in any science
class. This exercise helped me to understand that not all writing is the same,
and you can write for different purposes in one topic.
Writing lab reports and scientific papers are another type
of writing that secondary students have to learn effectively. When students understand
the importance and the purpose of writing scientific reports in real life, they
are more likely to learn it effectively. Scientific reports include most of the
real-world writing purposes that Gallagher outlined in his text, so when
students write a lab report, they will be able to stretch themselves as writers
into different writing discourses. A scientific report usually consists of abstract,
introduction, materials and method, results, discussion, and conclusion. Each section
of the lab report consists of specific purpose and specific type of
information. For example, the abstract is the summary of the report. The introduction
outlines the purpose of the experiment, gives background information on the
subject, points out the questions that need to be answer through the experiment,
and states the hypothesis – an educated guess tested through the experiment. The
material and method section report all the materials and methods used in the
experiments. The results section reports the data. The discussion section includes
analysis and interpretation of the data, the writer also in this section makes
a stand whether to accept the hypotheses or reject it. Finally, the conclusion
section could include a reflection about the experiment and a proposed
solution. For each section in the lab report, students learn to write for a
different purpose.
Students needs to understand the importance of scientific
reports as records for scientific information that future researchers and
scientists could build on to expand our understanding of natural phenomena. Students need to understand that writing
scientific report is also an important skill that is required into many careers
in the science field. Moreover, many professions require some form of writing reports. For example, doctors and nurses write medical
reports and accountants and business managers create financial reports.
As a future science teacher, I will provide my students with
real world models of scientific reports. I will model writing a lab report in
front of the students, and I will think aloud while I am writing. Students need to see the process of writing
reports to understand the process. Finally, I will let students write several
drafts for the report, and for each draft I will keep providing them with
feedback until they hopefully learn how to write a good lab report.
Hey Hadeel,
ReplyDeleteI like how you bring up Gallagher's emphasis on the purpose of writing in the real world. I think this also connects to how the author extrapolates on students' ever-growing sense of "why". Students are always asking "why" and too often educators shut them down or brush it off by giving a useless answer like "because" or "its on the test". Stifling a student's curiosity does not allow them to express their thoughts. Perhaps this also accounts for part of the 7,000 students who drop out.
But by explaining the importance and the real world application of the material, kids would be more motivated to learn and listen.
Great post, Hadeel! I especially enjoyed the chart that you created!
ReplyDeleteI am glad to see that you plan to model writing a lab report for your future students because I believe a level of transparency in regard to how we go about the writing process is very beneficial to students.
I'm studying to become a math teacher, and so I think that a lot of what Gallagher discusses throughout the chapter is really relevant to the proofs students learn to write in geometry classes.
With that, I very much like the idea of allowing students to examine real-world writings (in this case, basic proofs) so that they can really get a sense of how proofs are written. Because different types of writing have such vastly varying purposes, it seems only fair to offer students examples for guidance.